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October 2nd, 2010, 11:55 pm

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Reply Siliva, October 2nd, 2010, 11:59 pm

Finally...chapter 5 has begun! And with color pages! Coloring has gotten a lot better since chapter 2, lol.

So, Hikaru and Azuki begin to talk...and she more or less challenges him to a duel!

Look out for the next page in a couple of days, hopefully.

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Reply Siliva, October 3rd, 2010, 12:55 am

Responses @godmoderncommander: Thanks, I think it's sexy too. XD It's one of my greatest works so far in this series. Color pages should be up more often...we want to save them for important events that occur at the start of a chapter, just like a real manga.

@RazorD9: Thanks a lot. (: And yeah, Azuki has basically entered the realm of badassery like Sakima and Taisuke. Never mind we're using the "dueling on vehicles" again though. lol. Last time it'll happen, I promise.

@scytheholder: Thank you very much! I'm glad to know you like it just as good as a published series.

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Reply godmoderncommander, October 3rd, 2010, 12:02 am

Sexy page is sexy. >:3

Seriously though, I love this page. The colors look great. Especially on Azuki. You should do color pages more often.

Reply RazorD9, October 3rd, 2010, 12:23 am

Sweet page!
Oooh, get to see Azuki in action, on a truck!

Reply scytheholder, October 3rd, 2010, 12:48 am

This comic amazes me. It freaking entices me like any published series. And this is epic page in color!

Reply GreyouTT, October 3rd, 2010, 1:28 am


Reply TemplarKnight, October 3rd, 2010, 10:55 am

I've been following this series for quite a while now, and I must say I'm rather impressed. There are, however, a few flaws here and there that detract from the professionalism - I would suggest that you try to pace your duels out a little bit, even if they take longer, and work on your card making skills. Some of the original cards you use either seem too bland or tend to stretch belief with their effects. A popular technique in Yu-Gi-Oh manga is skipping over the nonimportant parts of the duels, instead of showing every single turn due to limited space. I'm just throwing that out in case you feel too pressed to fit everything in. I'll be commenting often from now on, and quite possibly drop a full review for your past work. On this page specifically, you did very well - motion depiction is one of your art's strongest points, even if the lines in Azuki's face seem a bit off in the last panel. Your choice of colors is also superb.

Reply Siliva, October 3rd, 2010, 4:49 pm

@TemplarKnight: First off, let me say that I'm honored that some one else is stepping up and giving me a review. I don't get crit all that often, was just about to ask if people wanted to review it.

That being said, I always thought our duels were pretty long to begin with. I like your idea of skipping the unimportant parts though. While the manga does skip around, it's normally to work within the length restrictions of a weekly magazine.

I would be very grateful if you began to comment more often and even reviewed the past work. Even if we've improved since then, we may have missed something. C:

Again, thank you for your comments. I look forward to reviews from you.

Reply GhostLord, October 3rd, 2010, 5:36 pm

The artwork of this comic keeps getting better and better with every chapter. I can't wait to see the lightsworns in action.

Reply MinatoKizuna, February 28th, 2011, 10:14 am

The color looks awsome on this page

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