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November 3rd, 2010, 2:43 pm

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Reply Siliva, November 3rd, 2010, 2:46 pm

It's been a little while, hasn't it? Well, here's the next page. Hikaru summons out Jain, and uses its ability to take out Azuki's monster. What else will he have in store?

If you haven't seen the news page yet, then check it out. Our editor has introduced herself and come out of hiding after a year of helping us out.

And the banner has finally changed, although it's a bit bigger. Tell me if you want it back to normal-size.

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Reply Siliva, November 3rd, 2010, 3:11 pm

Responses @godmoderncommander: Yeah, things really aren't looking good for her. >>

@TemplarKnight: I'll probably change the banner again soon. I just couldn't stand at the badly-drawn one I had before. D:

Azuki's reaction seems legit to me. It's probable that she's never seen or heard of Lightsworns at all. (Shame on a Duel Agent for not doing their homework...) There are other lines later on that suggest she has no idea what they are.

I wouldn't be able to tell if our editor was directing it at you. Sure seems like it, now that I think about it...

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Reply godmoderncommander, November 3rd, 2010, 2:52 pm

I get the feeling that Azuki is going to get her ass kicked.

Reply TemplarKnight, November 3rd, 2010, 2:53 pm

Eh, I'd prefer the banner in its original state. The current one feels too cloggy.

Poor Azuki, you overdid it with her facial expression again. She looks positively aghast when Hikaru declares his attack. Also, this reminds me of a fanfic I once wrote, where the Lightsworn duelist used Jain as her opening move and its attack power buff took the opponent by surprise. Guess it's a common technique.

Good job on drawing Jain's armor. But its stance in the last panel seems just too stiff.

Also, why do I feel the last part of that news post was directed at me? XD. Still, though, I approve sooo much of your editor's choice of screen name, Tsukihime was one of the best visual novels, no, stories, I've read, behind F/SN though.

Reply Hero of Comedy, November 3rd, 2010, 4:55 pm

It has the same ability as one of my favorite cards, Spirit of Flames.

Reply AoiTsukihime, November 4th, 2010, 1:21 am

For some reason it was your nagging that I be grilled that I was told to make myself known. I only asked that I get a little credit, since I've been burning my brain to get the story done right.

And it wasn't directed to anyone. Basic underlying message of mine. But ah... FSN... Been too long since I read that. Maybe I'll go borrow my friend's next time I see him.

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