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July 15th, 2011, 9:30 am

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Reply Siliva, July 15th, 2011, 9:43 am

I've been in a bit of a drawing rut lately. @__@ I don't really like how this page turned out at all. I'll try and just do more practice, I guess.

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Reply TemplarKnight, July 15th, 2011, 5:02 pm

What I really don't like about this page is the last panel - Taisuke looks just plain out weird in it. Other than that this went pretty well - I did not expect Taisuke to try and kick them out for their failures. Sakima's madface on page 10 deserves special mention as one of the most epic moments in the story so far.

All in all, nice work, I'm curious to see how it will go from here. I'm guessing the director will want Sakima to stay on the case, or Taisuke will be otherwise convinced by Sakima's bravado and Azuki's tear-stained face.

Reply Siliva, July 20th, 2011, 4:01 pm

Responses @TemplarKnight: Thanks for your comment, as always. The story's in a bit of an "intermission" phase so to speak, just having come off from its first major event. That doesn't mean that it'll be uninteresting though! (I hope at least, lol)

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